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Adullam, Her Forge's avatar

The way you went not just real but relatable makes your writing interesting.

Thank you for putting this out.

The Woman's Gaze's avatar

Thank you so much! Appriciate you reading :)

Cathy Jacob's avatar

I so needed this today. Thank you for saying out loud what’s been swirling around in my mind.🙏

The Woman's Gaze's avatar

Glad to hear that Cathy <3 xx Thank you for reading

Gilded Pleasures's avatar

The hardest thing I have found about character-driven writing thus far is when the characters stop driving the story as clearly—the soft, mushy middle, where you have to dive even deeper into their psyches to figure out what happens next.

The Woman's Gaze's avatar

Agreed. Usually when you realize your blind spots. Which feels weirdly annoying sometimes.

Sage Drift's avatar

This piece felt like someone reached into my own tangled writer-brain and laid it out on the table. The swing between “this is brilliant” and “this is absolute garbage” is so real it hurts. Thank you for naming the contradiction so honestly — and for the reminder that the mess is part of it. Beautifully said.

The Woman's Gaze's avatar

Thank you so much! Glad it resonated x